Monday, 22 July 2013

Songstone Blog Tour: Interview, Review, & Giveaway!!!



Welcome to the first day of the Songstone tour! It's bound to be a blast. At any time, you can check out the Tour HQ. Enjoy the tour!

About the Book

Kita can meld song into stone. In a world with no written word, storytelling—the ability to meld (or magically impress) song into stone—is greatly honored. The village honors her master as their medicine man, but Kita knows he's secretly a sorcerer who practices black magic using drops of her blood. She fears he’ll use her beautiful gift for a killing spell, so she conceals it from him. Each day, his magic tightens around her neck like a rope. His spells blind the villagers, so they can’t see him for what he really is.

Not that anyone would want to help her. She was found in the forest as a baby and would have died if a village girl hadn't brought her home. But the villagers saw Kita's unusual coloring and decided she belonged to the mysterious tribe who lives in the forests of the volcano, a people feared for their mystical powers. So they fear her too. Now seventeen, she can barely admit her deepest longing: to know who she really is and where she belongs. 


Then Pono, a young journeyman, arrives from the other side of the island. He's come to fulfill a pact between their villages: to escort a storyteller back to his village—a storyteller who'll be chosen at the great assembly. Finally, in Pono, Kita sees her one slim chance at freedom and she'll risk her life to take it. 

A dark, twisty tale of sorcery, tummy-tingling romance, and adventure, inspired by the folklore of New Zealand's Māori people.



You can find Songstone on:

Amazon (Kindle) 
Barnes & Noble (Nook)
Kobo


About the Author


Lena lives in a scenic small town in Massachusetts with her husband, two kids, and a very spoiled Black Lab. She writes fiction for young adults, mostly light fantasy with a healthy dose of "sigh-worthy" romance. You can visit her online at www.lenagoldfinch.blogspot.com.



Author Interview

1. Why did you decide to focus on the legends of the Māori? That's an original, refreshing idea!

Thanks, Rebeka, and thanks for having me here! I didn't set out saying, "I think I'll write a story based on the legends of the Māori!" I didn't gather books on their myths & folklore, which would have been the logical place to begin if that had been my intention from the start.

The original spark of an idea came to me when I was on vacation several years ago. We'd rented a cottage on an island on Lake Winnipesaukee (New Hampshire). The island has boat-only access, which seemed liked an exciting idea. It was actually a bit terrifying for me, because I hadn't had much experience with boats (ironically despite the fact that was my father was in the Navy! ;)). So I was way out of my comfort zone. Fortunately, as a writer, being out of my comfort zone is a pressure cooker for new ideas.

I started daydreaming about this girl who needed to cross a very dangerous lake, and I knew somehow her quest was imperative. She had to go, but she needed the help of a journeyman to get across. (Perhaps my husband, the experienced boater, unwittingly inspired the role of "hero to the rescue"? LOL)

How I got from that initial spark of an idea to New Zealand was a roundabout trip. My research often leads me down a convoluted trail. I'm not methodical in the beginning days of a new project. I'm scouting for anything that catches my eye and fires my fascination. (On the premise: If it's not fun and interesting for me, why would it be fun or interesting for a reader?) I combed the internet for images of possible settings. I went to local libraries and flipped through table-sized (ok, practically!) photo books on geography.

I saw it as a gorgeous place that could kill you. (Perfect! ;))

So my search for a setting drove me to New Zealand (and other Pacific islands). A lot of what fascinated me about New Zealand was the incredibly gorgeous landscape. It's a stunning place, but it's also filled with all sorts of dangers. It's an island with steaming sulfurous lakes and active volcanoes. From there, my scouting brought me to Māori myths and the legends of the pakepakehā.

"In Māori tradition patupaiarehe, also known as tūrehu and pakepakehā, were fairy-like creatures of the forests and mountain tops. Although they had some human attributes, patupaiarehe were regarded not as people but as supernatural beings (he iwi atua)." From www.teara.com<http://www.teara.govt.nz/en/patupaiarehe/page-1>.

Note (aka author disclaimer): Though Songstone was greatly inspired by Māori legends, I don't claim that it's a faithful representation of Māori myth. I have a great respect for their culture. I'm also aware that the world of Songstone is very much colored by my own imagination, personality, and worldview. (For instance, in early drafts I kept thinking of comparisons to snakes, but there are no native New Zealand snakes. The deadliest creatures on their island--back then anyway, pre-European contact--were great lizards and sea creature, like sharks, so I had to pluck out my snake references. :))

2. Where did your main character spring from? How did you build her?

The image of a girl on a dangerous quest was the first thing that came to me. Her physical characteristics were later inspired by the legends of the patupaiarehe: her red hair, very white skin, and green eyes (the patupaiarehe were said to have blue or light colored eyes, and green suited Kita). I also imagined she'd go through a life-altering transformation on her journey.

The idea of her being adopted came from my own experiences as an adoptive mom. Kita is a fish out of water. She was found as a baby lost in the forest and adopted by a family from a local village. Writing this story in a fantasy setting, far removed from life here at our house, was a way for me to more freely explore the more painful issues associated with adoption. An adopted child has suffered a tremendous loss that shapes his/her world. For some kids it's more painful than for others. For Kita, I amped the stakes as high as possible. She's not only a foreigner to her adoptive family, she has the appearance of a mysterious people feared for their mystical powers, so she's ostracized. In many ways, she doesn't belong to either world. Her quest initially is to escape from her evil master, Matiko, but as the story unfolds it's also a quest to discover who she is and where she does belong. It's a quest to discover her real family, which means many different things.

As a teen/young adult, she's also discovering who she is and what she's capable of. Those years are often about leaving home behind for the first time and discovering self. That journey often leads right back to home, when we discover the people in our lives are what really matters most. :)

3. Without spoilers, what is your favourite scene in the book?

Oh, wow, that's hard! I love a bunch of the scenes, all for different reasons, some for the action, some for revelations, or, mostly, the romantic moments.... I'm a real romantic at heart. ;) But I'd have to say either the scene when Pono gives Kita a small-but-meaningful token and then does something rather extraordinary on her behalf. There's something in particular that's tormenting her, and his action on her behalf is, to me, amazing and perfect. (I'm trying to not give away too much!) It actually came about as a surprise to me. I didn't know going into that scene what he was going to do, and yet as it unfolded it seemed like it was meant to be from the first page. Writing is at times a very mysterious process. There are moments of discovery which come as if someone else knows the grand plan, but only gives me little bits and pieces at a time. LOL I also love the Epilogue. Without saying too much, it makes me happy. :)


Having read this book, I know what scene you're referring to, and it made me fall in love with Pono even more! He's such a prince charming, without even being a prince! ;)


MY REVIEW

Songstone was a novel full of lush locales, dynamic characters, and VERY evil villains. It took me to a place I'd never been, an island I assume is based off New Zealand. I adored the jungle setting and felt transported to a whole new world. Kita and Pono's slow-to-burn romance was sweet and steady, and Pono was a male character I couldn't help but cheer on! He was kind and very much a gentleman, who also had vulnerabilities. It was awesome to see this kind of character as the romantic hero in a Young Adult tale, rather than the brooding, masochistic type.

The one detail that gave me the creeps a wee bit was the magic. The villain in this story is a sorcerer, and the power he had over the villagers was absolutely terrible. I wish there had been a bit more of a line between what the normal villagers did and what the villain did--they both used magic, but the story never delved into whether or not the villagers' magic could twist their souls. I think exploring further their religious mythos as well would have added another layer of depth.

I did like how Kita struggled with her own thirst for power and recognized that it was a bad thing. She was a very well-rounded character, not always acting as she should but altogether very human and very relatable. I loved her various revelations and her slow journey to becoming more open with other people. 

There were a few storylines that weren't completely wrapped up at the end, leaving it open for perhaps further adventures. I would love to see where Kita and Pono go next. I think--and hope--they have a lot of adventuring left to do!


GIVEAWAY(S)!!!!!

Lena is generously offering a bunch of cool prizes to one lucky winner!


We’re doing a sweet summer giveaway in conjunction with the blog tour! The giveaway is open internationally, and one winner (randomly drawn) will receive:

· A signed copy of Songstone (Paperback)

· A sea glass necklace with turtle charm (Picture will be included on the blog tour home page and in the introduction post)

(designed by The Studio of Glass)

· A $10 Dairy Queen gift card (U.S.) or a $10 Amazon.com gift card (international)
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PLUS:

I am hosting an EXTRA GIVEAWAY for an e-copy of one of Lena's books; the winner's choice of Aire, The Language of Souls, and Songstone.

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BLOG TOUR SCHEDULE

Monday, July 22nd

Tuesday, July 23rd
Wednesday, July 24th
Thursday, July 25th
Friday, July 26th
Saturday, July 27th
Sunday, July 28th
Monday, July 29th
Tuesday, July 30th
Wednesday, July 31st
Thursday, August 1st
Friday, August 2nd

Friday, 19 July 2013

Book Review: "Wonder Show" by Hannah Barnaby

Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, step inside Mosco’s Traveling Wonder Show, a menagerie of human curiosities and misfits guaranteed to astound and amaze! But perhaps the strangest act of Mosco’s display is Portia Remini, a normal among the freaks, on the run from McGreavy’s Home for Wayward Girls, where Mister watches and waits. He said he would always find Portia, that she could never leave. Free at last, Portia begins a new life on the bally, seeking answers about her father’s disappearance. Will she find him before Mister finds her? It’s a story for the ages, and like everyone who enters the Wonder Show, Portia will never be the same.
      -image and summary from Goodreads.com

This book was full of potential. Its writing was lovely and lyrical, full of the vagueness of dreams and yet sharp with the harsh grit of reality. This story could have had it all.

But--it was VERY short. In my library, it was shelved in the Young Adult section, which I found apt for its content. However, nowadays young adult novels are well over 300 pages. I felt the author could have taken advantage of this fact to expand her world. Maybe I'm just greedy, but if I could take a whole pie over a thin slice, you can bet your bottom dollar I would.

I wanted more of everything: Portia and how her relationships affected and formed her; more about the circus and the people in it; and more of an ending. In particular, one character vanishes in the midst of the novel and then we never really hear from her again. I would have liked knowing what happened to her--if she got to where she was going, etc.

If I remember correctly, there were a few instances where God came up. This could have opened up a lot of thought-provoking narrative, but as it was, it was just left hanging. Portia never really commits to any sort of belief or idea about believing. Maybe the author intended to have Portia ever roaming, suspended between realities and never really landing. But to me, it felt a wee bit like playing it safe. I know some people think having this floating feeling, this just-be-you-and-don't-think-of-the-bigger-things idea is a new form of art, but to me, how likes thinking of the bigger picture, it just falls flat.

I loved how the author described the setting of the places Portia came to. The towns, the mansion--they all had their own atmosphere and personalities. The author certainly knows how to weave beautiful words together.

However, somehow I just could not connect to this story like I wanted to. I simply wanted more, of everything.

Three stars!



Wednesday, 17 July 2013

May the K9 Spy Blog Tour: Spotlight Post


Welcome to the third stop on the "May the K9 Spy" Blog Tour! If you're new to the tour, make sure to check out ALL the blog tour stops to gather the scavenger hunt clues for your chance to win some cool prizes! All you have to do is collect the letters highlighted in red and unscramble them to make the correct word. Submit your guesses here

Now, a bit about the books:


May on the Way: How I Become a K9 Spy

Sometimes I start with a well-thought out plan, and sometimes, me being me, things just happen. In my imagination I'm on my way, heading anywhere. Because anywhere's better than here.

Which is why I'm staring at this latch. I'm going to escape today. I've been watching closely to see how they work it, though no one's noticed.

Humans... So unaware...



Available in Kindle format for $2.99 on Amazon.com.
FREE for Kindle: July 16-20, 2013



An enterprising escape, a perilous mission...

After going astray during K9 Spy boot camp, May tries to find a way to the American Embassy in Paris.

Join her and Léonce, a feral cat, as they sniff out an evil plot leading from Benjamin Franklin's park through the historic Passy Cemetery to The Pantheon...including a journey under the city!

Available in Kindle format for $3.99 on Amazon.com.
FREE for Kindle: July 23-27, 2013







Giveaway Information:

Check out the rules and join May the K9 Spy’s Scavenger Hunt at May’s Blog Tour HQ
May also has a “Lucky 7 Rewards for Reviewers” drawing happening this month! Grab a copy of the book(s), submit your review(s) on Amazon.com, and enter to win super cool prizes. Details can be found in May’s latest newsletter, or contact May’s publicist at amberstokes@editingthroughtheseasons.com


About the Author:

KC and May
KC Frantzen learned to speak critter at a young age. She and her husband volunteer with a variety of projects, including the Joni & Friends Wounded Warrior Getaway. They enjoy traveling just about anywhere, which helps formulate ideas for May the K9 Spy. The family lives in the country hills of middle Tennessee with two Arabian horses and several rescue dogs, including the real May.

Learn more about KC and May at www.maythek9spy.com, and connect with May on her Facebook page.



Spotlight Post

If you like the sound of May the K9 Spy, you'll love these other dog books!



The Puppy Tales Collection

When puppies get together, there's sure to be some mischief - and fun! These twelve puppy-dog tales introduce some of the fine, upstanding citizens of Houndsville and one or two rascals as well. If you look very carefully, you may discover the bones that those pesky pups have buried on every page.
-image and description from Amazon.com

When I was searching for the info for this book to include in this post, I was aghast to see that its hardcover was no longer available. But guess what? Its paperback will be released in October of this year! I highly recommend this collection; it was a favourite of mine and my sister's when we were younger. Its glossy pages and pictures filled our imaginations and made me wish I could visit Houndsville and all its inhabitants. And trying to find the hidden bones will keep your kids interacting with the stories. The characters are silly and endearing, and the stories will warm your heart and make you laugh.




Because of Winn-Dixie

The summer Opal and her father, the preacher, move to Naomi, Florida, Opal goes into the Winn-Dixie supermarket--and comes out with a dog. A big, ugly, suffering dog with a sterling sense of humor. A dog she dubs Winn-Dixie. Because of Winn-Dixie, the preacher tells Opal ten things about her absent mother, one for each year Opal has been alive. Winn-Dixie is better at making friends than anyone Opal has ever known, and together they meet the local librarian, Miss Franny Block, who once fought off a bear with a copy of WAR AND PEACE. They meet Gloria Dump, who is nearly blind but sees with her heart, and Otis, an ex-con who sets the animals in his pet shop loose after hours, then lulls them with his guitar.Opal spends all that sweet summer collecting stories about her new friends and thinking about her mother. But because of Winn-Dixie or perhaps because she has grown, Opal learns to let go, just a little, and that friendship—and forgiveness—can sneak up on you like a sudden summer storm.
-image and description from Goodreads.com

Writing up on this book reminds me that I have to read it and watch the movie again--which stars AnnaSophia Robb, one of my favourite actresses. Though written for children, this book has a heart and a lesson from which adults should learn. I think, knowing where I am now, this book is actually more important for me to read today than it was when I first read it as a child. It has more to say to me. I hope you will give this book the chance to capture your heart. Now excuse me while I dig Up my old copy from somewhere (hope I still have it!) and read it again.


Blog Tour Schedule
· Monday, July 15th: Introduction to the tour at Seasons of Humility
· Tuesday, July 16th: Tuesday Tea with May and KC at Sherida Stewart
· Wednesday, July 17th: Spotlight at The Other World
· Thursday, July 18th: Spotlight at Diane Estrella
· Friday, July 19th: Spotlight at Writing Roseanna
· Saturday, July 20th: Spotlight at Returning to Eden
· Sunday, July 21st: Spotlight (and review?) at The Curried Nut
· Monday, July 22nd: Review at Edgy Inspirational Romance
· Tuesday, July 23rd: Interview with May at Buckley’s Blog
· Wednesday, July 24th: Review at Best Reads (2010-2013) 
· Thursday, July 25th: Review at Bluerose’s Heart
Friday, July 26th: Conclusion of the tour at Seasons of Humility


Enjoy the rest of the tour!

Monday, 15 July 2013

Dragonwitch Release Day Blog Tour: Character Interview: Lady Leta of Aiven


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 An Ancient Evil 

Long ago, Etanun buried his sword in the depths of the Netherworld then vanished from all known history. One day, it is said, his heir will find the sword, and the Dragonwitch, firstborn of the Dragon King, will be finally slain.

A Desperate Hope

These stories are no more than nursery rhymes. In a world of cold reality, what room is left for fairy tales? Lady Leta of Aiven is pledged to marry a man she does not love . . . sleepless Lord Alistair struggles to unite the stubborn earls of the North Country . . . Mouse is lost, far from home, slaving as a kitchen drudge . . .


. . . and the reclusive Chronicler, keeping the records of Gaheris Castle, bears a secret so dangerous it could cost him his life and plunge the North Country into civil war.

An Impossible Journey

But when nursery rhymes begin to come horribly true, will these unlikely heroes find the strength they need to fulfill a prophecy of fire? For the Dragonwitch lives. And she has vowed vengeance on all who have wronged her.


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Anne Elisabeth Stengl is the author of the award-winning Tales of Goldstone Wood series, adventure fantasies told in the classic Fairy Tale style. She makes her home in Raleigh, North Carolina, where she lives with her husband, Rohan, a passel of cats, and one long-suffering dog. When she's not writing, she enjoys Shakespeare, opera, and tea, and studies piano, painting, and pastry baking. She studied illustration at Grace College and English literature at Campbell University.



Character Spotlight:

Lady Leta of Aiven


"Practical" Leta

                                                                                 



Leta is the eldest daughter of Earl Lebuin of Aiven, one of the most powerful earls in the North Country. She is a quiet girl who has been brought up according to the ladylike standards of the day: She does not speak unless spoken to and ventures no opinions save those given her by her elders.







"Rebellious" Leta
               






But secretly, she is at war with herself. While practical Leta tells her to bow her head and marry Lord Alistair as she is told, rebellious Leta wonders if her life might not be meant for more than a loveless marriage . . . .


And now, the interview!


Me: Welcome to The Other World, Leta! I hope you enjoy your visit. We're all quite curious to learn more about you--you seem so quiet and mysterious. Why don't you give us a few introductory tidbits about yourself--your age, your favourite colour, the names of your parents, things like that. Don't be nervous--I won't bite! :)

Leta: Indeed, my lady, I am gratified to be invited to your other world. You must excuse my hesitant speech. I am not over-accustomed to talking about myself. But you put me well at ease.

I am eighteen years of age, old enough to contract a marriage. My favorite colour is blue, and I prefer to wear blue when given the choice. My mother tells me I should wear red because warm colours will warm the blood, and warm blood is much to be desired here in the cold North Country. But I think red makes me appear wan and listless.

My father is Earl Lebuin of Aiven, and my mother is Lady Acca of the House of Sondmanus, second cousin to the earl. Her alliance to Aiven was coveted by Sondmanus himself; yet Mother claims that were it not for her great beauty, her second cousin should never have succeeded, for he offered far too little in dowry. But my father, Earl Lebuin, insisted upon the match.

I wonder if Lord Alistair would have insisted for me? Somehow, I think not.

How interesting! How did you feel when your father told you he'd be marrying you to Lord Alistair? You can be honest here, we won't tell Earl Lebuin.... 

I was . . . not so pleased as my mother thought I should be. I might have liked to be consulted regarding my own wishes in the matter. After all, I had never so much as set eyes upon Lord Alistair! No one could say whether we would have any liking for each other. But Mother insists that liking has very little to do with a good match. As far as liking went, I doubt very much that she cared a great deal for my father. But she has borne him strong sons and secured prestige for her house. I should be grateful for such an opportunity. After all, it was said that Lord Alistair would be king one day.

But still . . . I would have liked to be asked.

Oh, poor dear! At least you have the Chronicler, right? You two seem to be really close friends. Is it true he's teaching you to write? What was it like, growing up without being able to read or write? It's something so many of us take for granted nowadays.

Yes, indeed, my acquaintance with the Chronicler of Gaheris has proven a surprising pleasure! He is very patient with me, for I am slow to learn my letters. I think I might have been faster had I started learning younger, as he did. But I am determined to learn, if ever I can! As I read and write, I see whole new worlds opening up before me, worlds I never knew existed back when I was simply the shadow-daughter sitting in the quiet rooms of my father’s house. I could not give up this opportunity now if my life depended upon it!

Is it true a lot of the history of the North Country is told through oral tradition? What's your favourite nursery rhyme or fairy tale?

There are many I enjoyed on a winter’s night when my father permitted a wandering minstrel to take his ease by our fire in exchange for a song or a tale. There is a story about the building of the final House of Lights, the one that, it is said, was not destroyed by the Flame at Night. The tale is called “The Coward and the Pit,” and it is a terrible, dark, wonderful story, one my mother deemed inappropriate for a young lady’s ears. So she would send me from the room if that tale was to be told . . . yet I, not always as obedient as my mother believed, would creep to the door and listen in. It mattered little how many times I heard the tale, or the variations expressed by the different tellers. I thrilled to the story more each time I heard it.

Sadly, it is too long a tale to share just now. But one day, perhaps. One day . . .

Any favourite memories of growing up in Aiven?

When I was quite small, my nurse would sometimes take me walking down the banks of River Hanna.  We would walk all the way to the pastures where some of my father’s finest livestock were kept. I enjoyed visiting the goat-herder especially, for the young kids were so lively, so wild as to seem lunatic! How I laughed at their antics! I don’t suppose I miss my own brothers or mother half as much as I miss those foolish goats . . . though it is perhaps wicked of me to say.

I heard from a little bird--perhaps a wood thrush--that you had a rather interesting experience with a star. In your own words, what was it like? 

Can one describe an experience such as that? It was like . . . but you’ll think this strange. It was like becoming part of a melody. Not hearing it—becoming it. A single thread of music wound together in a vast chorus, not important alone, never important . . . vital to the whole. It was . . .

No. No, I’ll not speak more of it now. You will forgive me.

Finally, is there anything you can tell us about your story, Dragonwitch? What should we expect?

Expect the unexpected, good lady! Every moment of that story was yet another unexpected twist or turn for me. Even now, I am breathless when I consider all that transpired, all that I have seen, all that I have become. There will be blood. What story does not, indeed, find its spirit in blood? But there will be love as well, for if blood is the spirit, than love is the heart.

Oh, sounds breath-taking indeed! Thank you so much for being here, Leta! 

 Indeed, it was my pleasure, Lady Beka.


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 Tour Schedule

Friday, 12 July 2013

A Personal Note

The road of life is rarely smooth. Today I went to the hospital to get my heart checked out; I've been suffering from heart palpitations and chest pain for the last few days. Last night I hardly slept because I found it difficult to breathe.   

Thankfully, I found out that I simply have an irregular heart beat, but since I didn't know what it was it caused me to almost have a panic attack. The doctor and I both think I'm suffering from anxiety. I also have to get some other health-related tests done in the near future.

So, while my situation is hardly life-threatening, it was still terrifying. (Especially since I'm not a big fan of hospitals). I am a big believer in the power of prayer, and I would appreciate those of you who read my blog to keep me in your thoughts and prayers. Pray that God drowns me in His Peace, so that I might share my joy with you all far into the future! :) Also, please pray for the wonderful doctors and nurses who attended me--I hope God pours blessings into their lives!

Thanks and blessings,

Rebeka

Saturday, 6 July 2013

Book Review: "Trouble in Store" by Carol Cox

Fired from her most recent governess position, Melanie Ross must embrace her last resort: the Arizona mercantile she inherited from her cousin. But Caleb Nelson is positive he inherited the mercantile, and he's not about to let some obstinate woman with newfangled ideas mess up all he's worked for. He's determined to get Melanie married off as soon as possible, and luckily there are plenty of single men in town quite interested in taking her off his hands.

The problem is, Caleb soon realizes he doesn't want her to marry up with any of them. He's drawn to Melanie more every day, and he has to admit some of her ideas for the store unexpectedly offer positive results.

But someone doesn't want the store to succeed, and what used to be just threatening words has escalated into deliberate destruction and lurkers in the night. When a body shows up on the mercantile steps--and the man obviously didn't die from natural causes--things really get dangerous. Can Melanie and Caleb's business--and romance--survive the trouble that's about to come their way?

--image and description from Goodreads.com

Trouble in Store by Carol Cox was an interesting read. Right off the bat, I sympathized with Melanie and her difficult situation. She was a likeable heroine and the ending where she faced the villain was enthralling and frightening. However, I did not connect to her as much as I wanted to. 

Caleb didn't seem to have as much personality, other than being rude to Melanie, missing his wife, and loving his son--all of which has been used before, countless times. There was nothing particularly fresh or original about him to draw me to him.

A few other things about how the mystery was resolved didn't quite make sense to me. I couldn't understand why a murderer would bother leaving threatening notes in the mercantile when someone they could have killed slept upstairs. Melanie was vulnerable this entire time, but the villain did not make a move until the end of the novel, which made no sense to me, criminal-wise.

What was refreshing to me was that the romance was not constantly dwelt on. In fact, Melanie had one other suitor whom I actually think I liked more than Caleb, and whom I hope gets his own story one day. I felt he was pushed to the side too quickly. The reverse side to not talking much about the romance was that when Caleb and Melanie go from arguing to loving each other, the shift seems too abrupt. While I understand and appreciate the author's attempt to make it natural, growing from 'enemies' to friends to romantically-involved, it still jolted me when Caleb described Melanie as "the woman he loved" when perhaps a month or so earlier he'd still been grumbling about all the changes she was making to the mercantile. I wanted some more time for their relationship to grow.

As well, at times Melanie was completely clueless, asking questions about the obvious. One instance she and Caleb were discussing how the intruder could have gotten into the mercantile and find a window which had been tampered with by a knife. And Melanie asked what it meant. I had to shake my head in disbelief, because it seemed pretty obvious to me.

There were a lot of typos in the version I read, which threw me off quite a bit. That's something the editor should have caught, but it still hampered my overall enjoyment.

However, this book was a clean, fun mix of romance, murder-mystery, and a sprinkling of the Wild West. The only way to know if you'd enjoy it is to check it out and decide for yourself. :)

3 stars!



I received a free copy of this book from NetGalley and Bethany House Publishing in exchange for an honest review. Thank you for the opportunity!